Well done for creating this poem and for trying to relate to how Neil Armstrong would have felt when he first hopped on the moon. I really like how you compare being on the moon to feeling like a star.
Don't forget to attribute your images - that is, tell us where your image is from.
Hi Elisha
ReplyDeleteI think this poem is great
Keep it up
Molly
Kia ora Elisha
ReplyDeleteWell done for creating this poem and for trying to relate to how Neil Armstrong would have felt when he first hopped on the moon. I really like how you compare being on the moon to feeling like a star.
Don't forget to attribute your images - that is, tell us where your image is from.
Ngā mihi
Jordan
Thank for the feedback, this will help me alot.
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