This is a great retelling of her story, I'm super impressed that you were able to put lots of detail in your own words and voice. Her story is really amazing and this is the best retelling I've seen from a student so far.
I don't have to much more to add, well done for your effort this summer with the SLJ. All your posts have been of a really high quality and you can be very pleased and proud of your work.
Hello Elisha, Vitaraag here. It has been a while since I have commented on your blog. It has been such a long time that today the Summer Learning Journey is ending! Do as many activities as you can so you can be awarded more points. I really like how you added a nice back round to attract the viewers. I also really like how you added so much information about her in your own words. She did something really incredible. I think I am actually really good at swimming. Maybe next time you could talk about the base of the activity. Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Hey Elisha,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great retelling of her story, I'm super impressed that you were able to put lots of detail in your own words and voice. Her story is really amazing and this is the best retelling I've seen from a student so far.
I don't have to much more to add, well done for your effort this summer with the SLJ. All your posts have been of a really high quality and you can be very pleased and proud of your work.
Daniel :)
Thank you Daniel
DeleteI just want to try and win because this is my first time doing the SLJ but it might also be my last so I just want to do as much work as I can!
Hello Elisha,
ReplyDeleteVitaraag here. It has been a while since I have commented on your blog. It has been such a long time that today the Summer Learning Journey is ending! Do as many activities as you can so you can be awarded more points. I really like how you added a nice back round to attract the viewers. I also really like how you added so much information about her in your own words. She did something really incredible. I think I am actually really good at swimming. Maybe next time you could talk about the base of the activity. Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Vitaraag