Tuesday, 30 August 2016
The scary day ever
Scary day
There once was two sisters they were named Elisha and Aisha.They went for a walk and saw scary stuff like…
Talking trees, animals glue to tree it's so weird
How can someone be this mad to animals!
They ran past and then came trouble
They screamed the giant said wait please I just what
To be friends then the giant said sorry! The giant
Then everyday after school they come there to
See the giant.Then when the girls went out to see
the giant mum said girls where are you going the
Girls told mum everything they know then the
Giant got mad because the girls promise the
Giant for a play day.The mother got mad.
So she asked the girls where is the giant.
When the mother and giant saw each other
They stopped and feel danger coming all because
of her she wished she never told the arm group!
She laed stop! Everyone stop and looked at mum
The arm and the giant became friends!
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Hi Elisha, I like the way you described some of the things the girls saw. It helped to paint a picture in my mind. Next time, you might like to try organising your story into paragraphs.
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